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Commission: Midnight Stalion (Corrections)

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As a midnight stallion race across the Great Plains his ebony mane flows in the wind. As he stops he notice the bright star shining so brightly as the stallions bows his head and spoke is soft Celtic voice, "Welcome home, young princess of the stars."
Many years later Princess Celestia along with her youngest sister Clara visited the charming villages of Ponyville. The air was filled with joy and liveliness all around the young princess as she asks her older sister if she may look around for bit.
As the young princess and two of her Pegasus royal guards (Ace and lance) escort her through the village, she runs ahead of them, the two guards smile as they watch her enjoyment of being outside the castle grounds. As they walk along the lake, the little princess stared at her reflection in the lake when three young ponies pop their heads out of the water startling the young princess and causing Lance to burst out laughing as Ace race to her side.

As Ace arrived he found the young princess giggling as he turn his head to yell at the three young fillies he took a minute to think and just as he smiled he asked if they care to show the princess around. As the three young ponies introduce them self as Apple Bloom, Sweetie Bell and Scootaloo. They show her around they came to the edge of the Everfree Forest; the four seem to notice 2 small fairies like creatures darting in out of the forest. As curiosity got the better of them they sneak into the forest while the princess's guards was not full paying attention.
As the young ponies chased after the 2 small creatures deep into the forest until the notice they lost the sight of the small creatures, as they wandered for a bit before they realize they were lost. As they carefully try to trace their path they come into a clearing where a midnight stallion stood watching a young zebra fight one of creatures of the Everfree Forest. As they approached, Sweetie Bell stepped on a branch as the sounds echoed across the clearing the stallion looks at them his eye crimson in color seems too grazed into their soul. As the young zebra walks up breathing hard as he thanked the creature for their match before it disappeared look at them and his teacher.
The midnight stallion bows at the young princess and said in soft yet powerful tone for them to that that path back as he points to it. And told the young student to follow as they moved deeper into the forest.
The four ponies stare for a moment wonder that they were. When they hear Lance and Ace arguing to each other on who fault it was that they lost the princess when they enter the clearing. As they escort the four back. The young princess hears a soft voice carried by the wind “Take care Star Princess”.
Then all of a sudden Clara, Scootaloo, Apple Bloom and Sweetie Bell look back to see that Clara's royal guards is here to save them. Suddenly when Sweetie Bell looked back at the midnight stallion they were gone and never heard from again.
When Clara was back safely at the palace she always hear noises like "Take care Star Princess" she wondered why was there a noise like that in the Everfree Forest, so she asked her sister Luna who knows all the legend in the Everfree Forest. She asked, Clara: When I was lost in the Everfree Forest with my friend I heard a sound that said "take care Star Princess" also i saw a midnight stallion sis do you know why?"
Luna: Oh that sound that means the forest wants you to take care if you come into the Everfree Forest and also beware if you see a midnight stallion, the midnight stallion is afraid of your guards that is why he just vanished "

Clara: Oh.
Luna: Thanks sis.
As Clara left Luna alone she look up to the night sky and spoke in a whisper ”was it you, Starchaser?” she wander as Celestia walks towards her “who Starchaser?” Luna looks at her and said “An old friend” As she look sadden she whispered, “Why did you leave me”
For my friend :iconyuki-anesa:
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